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tender ripples by the-manik-poet, literature

3rd world by the-manik-poet, literature

What happens in a night or two by the-manik-poet, literature

Where do you live? by the-manik-poet, literature

Have you met my girl??? by the-manik-poet, literature

UP THE ROAD by the-manik-poet, literature

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Artist
  • Jan 14, 1985
  • United States
  • Deviant for 13 years
  • He / Him
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My Bio
LOOK! New to all this-raps is my thing hittin the studio
but I always liked poetry
kicked outa school in 8th grade
shoot I bet sum ya mamas and papas paid for your school and when yall was 14 yur gettin eggys made for ya while i was gettin ready for work

And for people who leave harsh comments i think yall do it to get people pissed not to help em fix whats wrong why be so rude when you can just say i wasnt feeling it heres why or fix this
not I dont think you know what your doing cuz you know what to sum people this might be all they have coming home to abusive dads and boyfriends and then what they love the most is just made fun of or laughed at all im saying is take it easy and im not saying on me
member theres kids and young artist on here and ima say artist cuz you work sumthing hard enuf
and you'll be great at it and im not the nicest looking person or have done the nicest thgings but I never talk down to people everyones = i dont care if you been here 4 yrs or 1 day just show sum respect

Current Residence: Florida
deviantWEAR sizing preference: why yall sending me free clothes
Favourite genre of music: too many
Favourite photographer: you know that one wit the camera
Favourite style of art: pretty butterflys and bunnys things like that
Operating System: r2d2 and theres a lil man with a helmet playing frisbe an things im my comp
MP3 player of choice: no money for an i pod had sum1elses once didnt like theyre music
Shell of choice: the ones on the beach
Wallpaper of choice: the 80s plastic kind the real taky house wallpaper
Skin of choice: ill stick with my own but mabey a lil tanner
Favourite cartoon character: felix the cat wit his bag of trix--pink panther-mario evil cartoons too
Personal Quote: if livin well is the sweetest revenge then i suck at getting back at people

Favourite Visual Artist
curtis mayfield its a joke yall prob dont know who he is=i like poet-ed poe painter-mc e
Favourite Movies
cool hand luke
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
too many
Favourite Writers
like my music unknown underground good stuf dead or alive if i connect or feel it i like it
Favourite Games
ha mario bros call me a noob
Favourite Gaming Platform
shit i be woopin on marios from bakin the day getting whistels to wooping on wii
Tools of the Trade
the pen will make the laws but the sword will chop yur hands
Other Interests
write work sleep

Just put what you feel new writer but been doing it a long time

0 votes
i liked what i read
think with more work you can do something good
liked it cuz ive been through the same thing
just didnt feel the one i read---if you pick this one please go read one more
didnt like any of your stuff
i thought it was ok
great stuff
not my style but good
i like the dirty poems
i like the GOD filled and drug ones
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like or dont like or dont care whatever pick one

1 vote
your ok
im a h8er so i dont like you or your poems
i thought you were good
shit in a week you wrote pretty much all thos not bad
yabba dabba doo
stuck in a maze there for i am a maze in
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LOOK vote something i dont care just vote dam it

2 votes
YOUR OK
I LIKED it
IT WAS GREAT
TO DARK
GO FUCK YOUR SELF===(yeah lets tell him to go fuk him self)
Why should i go fuk my self leave a comment saying why
an then i'll come look at your shit and tell you why you suck
then we we both can go fuch our selfs(YEAH)
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thank you for the fav
Thanks so much for the fav!
I did, very much. I could relate.
haha .. I just read it n' it's really dirty >.> ahah
Wow, thanks a lot for the favorites and the comments. Welcome to dA; just by reading your ID, you're a great poet. I like your stuff.